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Name: Download [RPG] The Flying Cave
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By:   Krist-Off
Version: 05-Jun-2014
TMX id: 5918616
LB Rating: Main Leaderboard Track 1,000
Track Details
Game: TM Nations Forever
Type: Race Style: RPG
Envir: Stadium Routes: Single
Length: Long Diffic.: Expert
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Author Comments

Hello all ! I present to you my new RPG track called The Flying Cave.
One month ago, I wanted to submit it for the RPG Spain Spring Cup 2014, but because of some PC problems, I didn't have the time for finish it So now I have decided to add a nice story and more ingame-MT to make it more adventurous


Story :
Somewhere in the clouds, there is a cave. A plane have destroyed it by accident, and you are not here to visit the places. You have to find all the books deposited by the pilot. They contains the history of this cave.

History of the cave :
In 1998, a meteorite have struck the moon. A lot of fragments were floating in the space. Years after years, they have been reconstituted by the time... And in 2014, they are in the sky of our planet ! The researchers have discovered it not a long time ago. So, they decided to land a plane on it, for visit and take some photos of this event.
The last lines of the books, redacted by the pilot, say : "It is magnificent to see it by the sky, but warning ! This is absolutely dangerous, and I think I can't land on it..."



Track Informations :
- Name : [RPG] The Flying Cave.
- Story : Look above I wanted to make a nice one, so i hope it is great Please read ?
- Media Tracker : Intro & Ingame, some text and cool effects.
- Blockmix : Yes
- Language : English
- Build Time : ~5 months, with some breaks because of PC problems
- Pathfinding : Yes. 3 or 4 pathfinding CP, and the finish.
- Length : I think a very good run would be ~8-9mins. For medium RPG players, I think ~13-16mins. First run really depend of your skills... I think between 1h and 2h.
- Difficulty : Intermediate - Expert Some medium CP and some harder.
- Mod : Manic Miner by Katodik (will load automatically)


All feedbacks are welcome !
HAVE FUN !

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(I am sorry for my english language... I know it is not perfect)

Edits :
Thank you adrijk for your award
Thank you TRAXX92 for your award

User Comments
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  Xerox. 05-Jun-2014
Shame you couldn't submit it for the cup =/
Looks good, gotta try it soon^^
  BuLL||DoZer 07-Jun-2014
My critism is focus on the MediTracker so...
1st. Don't make that "Welcome to the flying Cave" xD It is not really RPG like in my Opinion. It is enought when you just write the Trackname at the end.^^
2nd. This camera loop is also not really nice.^^ At the beginn there are very slow moves, so keep on with that moves and get sometimes a other cam position.
3rd. Do you know the "$s,$o,$w,$n,$i,etc" functions? That makes the Text not so boring.^^
4th. D: please don't make the sign-pics with the arrows... It really don't fits in a RPG.
5th. "haha... Don't be afraid it's a flying cave"? Does the MT speeks to you? I like a first person view better like: What happen here? It seem that the cave is moveing..." or something like that.
Same with the: There are 2 book in the room.^^ From where do you know it? Just let them find 2 books.
I like the shaking camera during you drive, but don't make it too long. It is a little but confusing for your eyes. *~*
It really looks nice from outside!

ok... for your 2nd Track on TMX it is really good.
Just make better CP's and stay with making story in the tracks and i hope it will improve you building skill.
I wait for new tracks.
  Krist-Off 08-Jun-2014
Thx BuLL||DoZer for your big critism For my 2nd track, I wanted to do a big one... Probably too big
I will try to make another with not a lot of MT like this one, just simple without boring parts...
  BuLL||DoZer 08-Jun-2014
Don't be sad. ^.^
My first tracks were also not really good, but now my skill is good enough to build nice tracks and this one has much potential.
The idea of a flying cave is nice, but to make it more logical, try to build it really in the sky.
  Krist-Off 08-Jun-2014
Yeah Build this one in the sky was my first idea... but it can be a copy of The Floating Island So I have built it on the ground And my first track is already a copy-idea of Mahâdevî's Gardens
Maybe, i can try to build a Flying Cave 2 with more potential...
  BobTheJanitor 09-Jun-2014
Literally not physically able to finish this track. The screen wobble causes me a massive headache after a few minutes. Especially something like CP 9, with a long amount of wobble right before a precise jump. If you fail the jump you have to go through the shaky screen again and again each time you retry. Sorry, but if you're going to use that, you should tone it down and put it on an easy CP where the player won't have to watch it over and over. Ow, my head...
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User Award   adrijk 07-Jun-2014
good one

greetz
User Award   TRAXX92 11-Feb-2017
y a pas à dire tu es un excellent mappeur donc voici cet award fais en bon usage
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